Wednesday, February 27, 2013

oral presentation comments (2-3mwf)

Give a three sentence comment for each of the presentors today. See to it that your comments are consstructive (your objective in giving the comment is to help the person improve).

Your comments will serve as your attendance and 10point quiz for today.

74 comments:

  1. to ms cherry esguerra
    Movie maker: no presentation
    Prezi:simple
    Webpage: no presentation

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  2. Cherry Esgurra's Presentation could be more lively if many pictures were uploaded and supported her discussions.. :Leo Mar Ellema

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  3. Cherry Esguerra

    comments;
    Prezi: she has a good presentation of her prezi but she forgot to mention the thinking skills the students may acquire. The games she prepared also is very interesting.

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  4. Cherry Esguerra :

    Prezi: the pictures are clear. She's just a bit nervous (it's obvious when she talks) :)
    Over all she presented well her lesson.

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  5. The presentation of Ms.Esgurra for her prezi can be a good motivation for the high school student even if the movie maker is not presented.She did not show us her webpage but give a simple background on it :)

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  6. Cherry Esguerra:

    Comments:
    She created a good presentation about her topic using prezi but she didn't talk about the thinking skill to be develop, I also like the motivation on activity he use powerpoint presentation. in here she develop the logial thinking of her students..

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  7. Ms. Cherry Esguerra

    Prezi : The prezi was good however there is lack of confidence in carrying her presentation. There is no acknowledgement shown :)

    webpage & moviemaker - unfortunately, not presented :)

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  8. to ms coco hyeonok
    moviemaker: nice movie maker. u can really get the attention of the students. i cant see the connection of your moviemaker and your topic.
    prezi: simple
    Webpage: nice lay - out. make your font size more readable.

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  9. Coco :
    Movie maker: it's funny the students will enjoy watching it but you must make your grammar correct. Don't use short cut words.
    Prezi: the background is too colorful. The words are being covered.
    Webpage: the links are working. It's educational.

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  10. Ms. Cherry Esguerra
    1. Se forgot her movie maker.
    2. She started her presentation with a warm-up game which is a good start. The pictures cannot be uploaded because of the slow internet connection; she should have uploaded the Prezi beforehand. with that, it would be better.
    3. She did not present her webpage.


    Ms. Jeong Hyeonok
    1. Her movie maker was really funny and enjoyable to watch. I think it was a good motivation.
    2. Some words are unreadable because of the combination of colors but overall it was good.
    3. The webpage used light colors and I think it was pleasing to the eyes of the viewers. Add more information if you can.

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  11. Jeong(coco)

    Comments:
    Movie Maker:She has a very funny motivation where i think students may focus on what the motivation all about.
    Prezi: Nice organization of topic.
    Web Page: hot potatoes are working.. :)

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  12. Cherry Esguerra:

    Prezi:
    her prezi was good. She needs to build her confidence in delivering her presentation.

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    Ms. Coco
    M: It was nice and funny, but there's a problem with the grammar.
    P: it was good.
    W: it was nice but it would be better if she completed all topics and should have acknowledge her sources

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  13. To Coco :

    moviemaker- The video clip is somewhat funny however there are grammatical errors. The background music doesn't suit the clip. :)

    prezi- The fonts color and the background design doesn't match however the contents are well presented.

    webpage- Try to make the designs match with each page.

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  14. Jeong, Coco
    She Had a nice movie maker for gettinmg the interest of her stufents but i can't understand much whast she is talking about it..
    Prezi
    She had a short prezi presentation other words written on to it is unvisible black by its color combination.
    Webpage
    The link are working it is good. she didn't acknowledge her sour but it is good.
    God blessed

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  15. coco.. your movie was great and a little funny...hahahaha...if i were your student i'd be really motivated......

    the prezi is very lively and super attractive however consider as well the readability of the letter you have put on it...

    gorgeous website...just make it a point that it is educational in nature and not an entertainment...

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  16. BALACDAO, STEVEN:

    For Cherry Esguerra
    The activity you displayed was really catchy. The transition of the plates where fine however supplementation of pictures to add and help in explaining the concepts where not that taken into consideration.

    For Jeong Hyeonok

    Your motivational video is humorous at the same time sensible. The prezi was a bit congested but at least you where able to give justice to it when you presented it orally in class.

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  17. Cherry Esguerra

    To: Hyeonuk, Jeong
    In the moviemaker, she made a movie that will motivate the student during the class hour, a funny movie was made. In terms to the prezi presentation different font size and color were used to attract the students but seems it distract more the attention of the students. The webpage has no resources, hot potatoes was presented.

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  18. hai mam.
    PREZI
    http://prezi.com/ncozbdumugit/untitled-prezi/

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  19. manang chery esguera only presented the prezi but it caught my attentions to the presentation you have made. it is effective kaya lang wala ung iba mung presentasyon.

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  20. jeong hyeonok. the movie maker you presented is funny and it is affective that make the student listen to you. good job .

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  21. carl cabatu...
    nice presentation....it make me laugh and enjoy the presentation. it is attractive most especially on the pictures u use

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  22. for carl cabatu:
    >>the movie maker is good but the fonts is not readable.. for the prezi it is just enough to use for a lesson.. for the webpage, he put too much texts and the font is not clear and can't read at the back..

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  23. FOR MR CABATU
    The poem in your motivational video is interesting. However, some pictures are overstretched that made it stinging in the eyes.
    An innovative webpage. Great!
    Overall: Satisfactory

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  24. carL cabatu :

    movie maker:
    nice pictures but the font is not clear.

    prezi:
    it is good..

    webpage:
    the font is not readable .. it is too small and it should not has the same color with the background.

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  25. Mr. Carl Jefrey Cabatu

    Comments:
    Movie maker: nice but you often used the same pictures.
    Prezi: pictures do not match in the description given. but good!
    Webpage:nice presentation..

    Job well done :)

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  26. To: Carl jeffrey Cabatu//
    Movie Maker - let the students view the movie b4 talking.lack time.
    Prezi - pictures doesn't match on the topic. good effects. more picture on the slides.
    Webpage - the font is small and the color is not appropriate on the background use. don't put pictures does is not appropriate in the webpage.

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  27. mr carl:
    moviemaker: great idea of motivation. the pictures and ideas presented are relevant to the subject matter you choose.
    prezi:simple lay out but very creative. pictures and concepts are clear.
    webpage:make your font size readable.

    ms michelle pangwi
    moviemaker:nice music..your movie maker is really a twist on what is your topic.
    prezi:the nice flow of the lesson develops while transferring to other stage.
    webpage:your webpage is very artistic and educational. good job!

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  28. ms.Gulod
    the presentation you have presents is actually interactive and affective. but you have to put some pictures most especially that the learners you are teaching are special. that they are not goo in reading only if you guide them. good job...

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  29. The Prezi seems to contain a lesson plan and not a discussion - :D
    The motivation video is better if you add an audio narration.. But the idea of introducing your video through a story is somewhat captivating

    Overall: Satisfactory

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  30. Mr.Cabatu's presentation is very good!specially on prezi.It could be more good if he puts Videos for Biag n Lam ang.

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  31. for michelle gulod:
    >>nice presentation but i cant see the motivation can really motivate a student its like she just made a movie maker telling a story of a kid who loves circle.. in her prezi the font is not clear.. for the webpage it is nice.

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  32. to:
    movie maker: nice story. it match on the topic.
    prezi: make your voice louder. good effects. the people with disability don't read the font size of your presentation
    webpage: good content.

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  33. micheLLe guLod:

    movie maker:
    it is nice but i think it is not a motivation ..

    prezi:
    she should use other font color.

    webpage:
    nice webpage.

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  34. Michelle Pangwi

    Comments:
    MOVIE MAKER: your motivation is interesting.
    Prezi:Very Nice :)
    Web Page: nice webpage:)

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  35. Ms. Michell Pangwi
    Movie maker: I like it, u made a story for them to agree about circle.. how to understand shape.
    Prezi: its more on activity than presentation or lesson proper.. but it is good because u create a good atmosphere for your student learn to express their skills and be active participant to your lesson.
    website: ok lang.. God bless agbiag!!

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  36. Carl Jeffrey Cabatu
    1. Moviemaker
    -- it's nice good moviemaker.
    2. Prezi
    -- Some font size are small, but it was nice.
    3. Webpage
    -- Fonts are small. It was detailed, good job maganda.
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    Michelle Gulod
    1. Moviemaker
    -- Beautiful very nice. :)
    2. Prezi
    -- Good prezi.
    3. Webpage
    -- Nice, it could help other people to understand Autism.
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    Steven Balacdao
    1. Moviemaker
    -- It's cute, wonderful (ahaha)good.
    2. Prezi
    --
    3. Webpage
    -- very good nice nice, good for learning. :)))

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  37. For Mr. Cabatu
    -Able to present even if he lack time ,next time if your the first presentor prepare your materials so that the time will be maximize.:)

    For Ms. Michelle
    -I appreciate the movie maker its so catching, next time make your voice louder so that the people in the back will here it. :)

    For Mr. Steven
    -He maximize the time in presenting because its almost time. :)

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  38. balacdao
    it is a good presentation and a good voice kaya lang kulang ang time

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  39. Mr. Cabatu:

    moviemaker _ Your moviemaker is good and sensible however it should have been better if you match the caption's color in the pictures presented. That was a good start :)
    prezi_ nice :) educational and at the same time the topics are well presented.
    webpage_ atLeast you personally did it .. great :)

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  40. Ms.Michelle:
    You can still improve more your motivation because if Im the student, I may not be well motivated to your video.

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    1. :D i just cOnsidered the characteristics of my learners that's why the flow of the clip is ganun :) Thanks by the way ..

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  41. Cherry Esguerra
    To: Carl Cabatu
    The movie maker is presented well wherein he compose his own poem to describe the " Epiko" though some pictures are used twice in the movie presentation. In the prezi, he tries to use pictures in order for the student to visualize the story "Biag ni Lam-ang". His webpage is organize and look different resources to be included though the website was not broad enough for access of information in different " Awiting pambata".Since this is his first time to do it, he still make his best to present what is good in their majors.
    To: Michelle Gulod
    The movie is simple yet the emphasis of the lesson is seen. He make use of simple features or images that the students can easily relate. In the prezi she must consider the font size and font style but over all the flow of discussion is good. In the website she focuses more in the autism, it would be better also if she consider some learning disabilities that caters to their need.
    Good job!!!

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  42. Mr Cabatu: the prezi is very nice and very educable.
    movie maker is simple and very attractive in the eyes because of many pictures
    Webpage is very simple and has a lot to learn

    Ms. Gulod. make your movie maker more graphical

    Mr. Balacadao.. the webpage is very professional and the movie maker is very authentic.......nice job...

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  43. Cabuto
    -movie: audio was good but repeatedly sung; some pictures were not that clear
    -prezi: some pictures were not that clear; use key points, if possible
    -webpage: very informational;

    Gulod
    -movie: very entertaining; the music was good
    -prezi: more on activities, which is good; focus more on your students
    -webpage: organization..; good webpage

    Balacdao
    -was not able to finish his presentation..

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    1. Ms. Estoque salamat sa comments.. pero Wrong ung last name ko..!! hehe

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    2. HALAH!! kuya, SORRY po.. :(
      sorry po talaga.. nagmamadali na po kasi ako nung tinype ko yan kaya di ko na napansin.. sorry po talaga..

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  44. Thanks sa mga good comments niyo same sa mga dapat ko pang baguhin.. guys.. sa mga susunod na presentor. God blessed And Agbiag.!!! lesson learned walang matatapos kung panay reklamo..!! hehehehe smile guys stress is the love that we offer on things we do in order to be good molders of young minds soon,!!!

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  45. Maam D...These are the prototypes of the certificates...since I have no idea on how to upload them in the blog..they are in my website...http://gotkumanz.weebly.com...Thanx XD

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    1. It was suggested that it would be better if the certificates for all the classes would be uniform. So we just followed the one made by Dan. Anyway, I would be giving extra points for you in making a sample certificate.

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  46. - Jeong, Hyeonok
    Sorry for late...
    I presented during that time. But i didn't know about my command that was our check for absent. So i commended now.
    first, her movie maker was vary good for me. Because, she used video and the video made me to mention and felt interest. but first time i couldn't understand what she want to say about. But when she explained, i can understood easily. I think there's no wrong grammar and wrong spelling. And i can say good that her movie maker was vary clearly.
    For Prezi, she discussed specific definition of positive, comparative and superlative. And she gave us examples. So that we can understand easily. And she gave a lot of example i think example is more important to understand.
    The last one was Webpage. Her topic was commonly used in American and British. She used webpage clearly. And she made hot potatoes using one site. So we can see a lot of examples. And I can see directly that what is different between American and British.

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  47. caroline L. Amahan
    webpage - http://chemcontri.weebly.com/

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  48. - to PIDO

    movie maker- i think you should put more interesting motivation for your students..
    prezi- good effects
    webpage-not well explained. the letters are too small..

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  50. To. PIDO

    > Movie maker - Her movie maker was good but I can't fine the point of motivation in her movie maker...anyway in her movie maker their was a good effects and song but I think you should put more motivation for the students.

    > Prezi - There was some problems in her prezi(the picture didn't complete upload) and her major is General Education but I think is not for them...Grade1(the letters are too small to read...and also the topic is hard to understand to Grade1).

    > Webpage - It was good but the letters are small to read...:)
    From. Park Su Lim (Julia)

    To. Steven Balacdao

    > Webpage - His webpage was very simple in design...and it also working well and I want to give a point in his hot potato.

    > Prezi - He did prepare well in his prezi! And he also give good effects:)

    > Movie Maker - He didn't show his movie maker...
    From. Park Su Lim (Julia)

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  51. TO. Suzanne

    > Movie Maker - She did make good motivation to her students and also in her movie maker there is interest because she put the part of movie so it can make the student get interest in her lesson.

    > Prezi - She did prepare well in her prezi. she give good & exact examples and also good in effects...and she also give many pictures to make understand the students.

    > Webpage - It was working well and good to see(design and arrangement). And her hot potato is working well:)
    From. Park Su Lim (Julia)

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  52. To Ruth Ann Lavarias

    - Movie maker : When she start we can see a lot of pictures. So i can guess what is her topic before start our lesson. But i want to say that too fast. For me, it was hard to read letter.

    -Webpage : In her main page, i can see the colorful pictures. And in the menu, she has a lot of information of arts. And there's her record of her real sport. It makes me excite. But i want to see some more specific information about her major.

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  53. To. RUTH ANN LAVARIAS

    > Movie Maker - It was very fast to read the letters and to watch the picture and the picture is not clearly to see...but she choose well in her song it make me to have excitement.

    > Webpage - She didn't prepare well in her webpage(she told during her present). But in design of her webpage was very clean to see and also she put many pictures to give information to us but I cannot able to see her hot potato and letters are small to read.

    > Prezi - she did not present...
    From. Park Su Lim (Julia)

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  54. Ruth Lavarias

    webpage:
    her webpage is incomplete ..

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  55. To Gaston

    - Movie Maker : Before start she used maybe her own pictures even some video. But i can not heard the sound. So it makes me to feel stuffy. And there's no a lot of explanation. But i can understand the lesson only use the pictures.

    - Prezi : she used pictures more than letter. If i am the children, I feel interest and understand easily.

    - Webpage : i want to see what is keyword of her topic. But for hot potatoes was good it make me to arrange the topic. This webpage was good!!

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  56. To. Gaston

    > Movie Maker - She did make well in her movie maker.

    > Prezi - At first it's not working well in her effects...but later on it was working well and also she did give many pictures to make students to understand more easy.

    > Webpage - It was good. She did well in decorate, information and arrangement. Hot potato is also working well:)
    From. Park Su Lim (Julia)

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  57. To De Castro

    - Movie Maker : Her music was good. And the picture also related with her topic and during see the picture i can see the discuss about the topic. So I can understand the discuss with the pictures.

    - Prezi : Her prezi was vary colorful. And it make me to attention easily. But i can not see the letter because, the back ground was very colorful. I want she consider about the letter and color or back ground. except this her prezi is perfect.



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  58. To. De Castro

    > Movie Maker - During her present, 1:10 up to 1:30 I cannot able to see that letters...because she put the color of letter in red and also the background...

    > Prezi - When she present her prezi is not clear to see...and also she didn't put her exact explain on her topic. Even she can't explain on her topic...but it was good in her effects.

    > Webpage - She didn't publish her webpage.
    From. Park Su Lim (Julia)

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  59. To. Amahan
    > Movie Maker - It was good to make the students are understand more easy and she did make well in short time.
    > Prezi - The picture is not very clear to see and understand that topic well and letters are also very small to read.
    > Webpage - It was good:)
    From. Park Su Lim (Julia)

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  60. To Amahan

    - Movie Maker : The music is good in relationship with the pictures.
    So i can attend much. And her movie maker is short so i can't feel board and her pictures good in step by step so i can understand more easily.

    - Prezi : Her background color is white so i can see more focus on her definition. But some letter was not clear. So i can't see clearly.
    But all the pictures i can see that there's explanation.

    - Webpage : In the menu all information are clearly.
    But i want to see simple definition.

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  61. To Baucan

    - Prezi : She discussed about head. For one page she used only a little letter with picture. So i know what she want to say about. but i want to get more specific meaning of that.

    - Webpage : She didn't publish her webpage on the Internet.

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  62. Jedidah Baucan

    No motivation
    Prezi: she forgot to mention the thinking skills but good
    Webpage: She did not publish her webpage.

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  63. Ms. Antonio

    No Motivation
    Prezi: good because there is an interaction in the lesson proper..not only the teacher is talking but also the students
    webpage:good!

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  64. To. Baucan
    > Webpage - She didn't publish her webpage.
    > Prezi - There was technological error at first. But she did well in her explanation and also pictures.
    > Movie Maker - ...
    From. Park Su Lim (Julia)

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  65. Ms. Lang-ay

    Motivation:nice!
    Prezi: you did not discuss to us on how are you going to teach your lesson proper and you forgot to identify the thinking skills
    Webpage: nice but the you must changed the font..

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  66. ms. Melba Pucayon

    Motivation:Good But the choice of song is not appropriate.
    Prezi:it's good but you need to improve it!
    Webpage: nice!

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  67. Ms. Melba Pucayon

    Motivation: The colors and fonts are are not in contrast
    Prezi: The pictures are good. The content is lacking though
    Webpage: The content was relevant to the webpage.

    Mam Melba's voice was soft :D

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  68. Ms.Tubadeza

    Motivation:nice..
    Prezi: good!
    Webpage:simple but nice

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  69. ms.Par sulim

    motivation:good
    prezi: its very colorful but still its good :)
    webpage: nice .. the font is difficult to read

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