Tuesday, February 26, 2013

oral presentation comments (11-1230tth)

Give a 3sentence comment on each of the presentations for today. See to it that your comments are constructive (it will help the presentors improve).

Your comments will serve as your attendance and your 10point quiz.

61 comments:

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  2. Yoon:

    Her movie maker has no sound and the pictures used was common. Her Prezi has limited information, only the keypoints/terms, no additional important information or details to supplement the keypoints. Her webpage content has lack of information also, some pictures missing, only the terms were shown.

    --Marlon Tio-tio

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  3. Miss.Yoon has a good Web Page but she talk that very soft..Regarding her prezi she did not explain well the connection to her lesson.
    Mr.kiwas has a job well webpage,as well as the Prezi were He discuss and relate it to his topic.

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  4. Miss Yoon's prezi is good, however it could've been better if she managed to explain it well to the class. Her movie maker is also good but there is no music to help in stirring up excitement to the supposed to be students.

    Mr. Kiwas' presentation is excellent. He has explained well the use of his webpage and the prezi (the images are cool). His movie maker is well processed and really stirs up the curiosity as well as the interests of the class.

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  5. 2nd presentor: Marcial Kiwas

    His webpage has fresh of information especially the pictures about 'Musiko Kordilyera' His Prezi is well-organized, the topic. Has background picture which suit the topic in her prezi. His movie maker is much interesting that really get the attention of the students.

    --Marlon Tio-tio

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  6. Kiwas Marcial

    The web page about music it is good. The prezi is unique information what if put some pictures to others know not just only definition. The movie maker, it is like watching advertisement in TV.

    -yooneunjin

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  7. Ms. Bao-ilan's use of the prezi is good because she related the theme of the prezi to her lesson and she also included her sources of information.

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  8. For Eun, nice organization but you can do better in the future. Maybe you think it is only a project but make it a part of your life. We are teachers that is why we take them as routine. Your movie maker and prezi are good. Just make the explanations clear. ^_^

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  9. Miss Bao-ilan her preziis functioning well and her theme is that good because it all about plants and its connected with it..but she did not yet present her webpage.

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  10. 3rd presentor: Bao-ilan

    The information in her prezi is broad (siksikan yung impormasyon) and there were several font color to each part of the topic which can be a distractions to students perception on the lesson; to understand the words. I did not see her present her webpage and movie maker.

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  11. For Bau-ilan, there is no problem with the prezi but you need to take note the kinds of student that you are going to have. Present in a more improved way. ^_^

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  12. Ms. Jeramie's movie maker is good. The pictures used were eye-catching and interest enhancer. However, if the students are elementary pupils, it could've been better if the music is somewhat like kiddie. The music used were overlapping each other that is why it is not pleasant in the ears.

    Her webpage's color combination is excellent because it can be read and seen clearly. She could've explained the contents clearly so that the essence of her webpage would be clearly understood.

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  13. Bao ilan
    Moviemaker is good. Prezi is well related to movie maker. Present in a more improve

    -yooneunjin

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  14. Posedio:

    Her movie maker is well good. Her prezi has software which is much interesting to learn. Her movie maker is well-creative which makes her webpage different by putting her pictures.

    ---Marlon Tio-tio

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  15. Yoon
    The movie maker has no sounds that. It must be better to have a music background to arouse more one's attention. It must be better if she speaks louder so that we can understand what you are discussing. :)
    Kiwas
    Your projects are great! But it is only ma'am whom you are talking with :)
    Bao-ilan
    Hi Clarissa! your projects are good, however, some links are not working and you didn't able to substantiate well. :)
    Posedio
    Hello! Your projects are good as well, but I didn't understand what your webpage is all about.

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  16. For yoon, your website, prezi, and movie maker were good but you need to improve more the discussion for the pupils to understand what you're saying

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  17. For Posedio, you have a very good website but try to improve your prezi. I love music but try to fit it in other way. ^_^

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  18. Posedio Jeramie
    nice for movie maker and prezi. for the prezi, hope it would be clear definition. The web page is good.

    -yooneunjin

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  19. For Bulandres, motivation is good because there are ideas of the steps. The prezi is good also but try to integrate moral lessons. ^_^

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  20. Kimberly
    The movie maker is good and good music, Prezi is good but integrated on lesson more. The webpage is good

    -yooneunjin

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  21. Bulandres
    Your movie maker is good. It is really a motivation. It must be better if you explain well your prezi (what about it?). :)

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  22. Ms. Bulandres' movie maker is excellent. However, the sources were not cited for validity's sake. the prezi color combination is good but the lesser the words are, the better.
    Her webpage's color combination is not well developed.

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  23. Yoon: I was not aroused by her movie.Her webpage lack some of the tabs or pages that are required.The prezi was not that organized and I'm looking for the 5 thingking skills.
    Kiwas:His webpage is very informative but the content was obviously copied.The animation in his prezi was very fast and not that organised, but it was nice because the contents were hidden then it will appear afterwards.The movie was edited well and it was very amazing.
    Bao-ilan:Her prezi was too wordy.Some words was not placed properly that's why it is not that clear.
    Posedio:Some pictures in her movie was not clear.It also contains some lesson. The words and background music overlapped from each other. Why did you put music to your lesson? How will the students listen to you if they are listening to your music?
    Bulandres:Some pictures are not clear.The movie elapsed the required time.The prezi is good and informative.There are no captions of the pictures.No hot potatoes.

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  24. Yoon: She didn't mention clearly the topic she's discussing. The moviemaker has many pictures but it was not motivating. In the webpage, personal contribution was evident but lesser number of information can be learned. The five thinking skills was not clear in the prezi presentation. The presenter was not able to discuss well all the three presentations.

    Kiwas: The creativity of the webpage was very good but all the concepts was obviously copied. The pictures in the webpage is freshly presented. The prezi presentation was good and creative and the 5 thinking skills was said but not that clear. Too many animations but very educational. The moviemaker was interesting but not to motivating for the students to make charcoal paintings.

    Bao-ilan: The prezi is too wordy rather than making it in bullet form or phrases. But the presentation layout is good coz it is related on her topic.

    Posedio: Moviemaker was not motivating. Some words are overlapping on the layout. Don't put music on the lesson proper since music is not your lesson. There is creativity in the webpage but the explanations are not expanded well.

    Bulandres: Pictures are pixilated and not clear but it is a little bit motivating in some ways. The prezi is too wordy rather than using bullets or phrases. The pictures in the webpage was freshly presented.

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  25. Miss jeramie well done with her projects,but one thing that makes it not good because music with her prezi and the movie she is presenting is overlapping.Her lesson is connected with her movie maker and prezi..Good website.

    Miss Bulandress good movie maker,its really good but the references are not acknowledge.For her webpage its educational since its all about olypics that is related to sports.

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  26. Bulandres:

    The sound of his movie maker is appropriate to the pictures about his topic on Martial Arts:taekwondo. Her prezi has complete important information on his topic: Taekwondo. The title of her webpage is not appropriate for her webpage. It should be a title that attracts people/visitors in her site, eventhough its only a webpage project.

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  27. Ms Yoon
    My comments for ms Yoon is that the prezi was not well explained she has a soft and light voice that is difficult to hear. the movie maker was good but doesn't have a sound. the webpage is simple and understandable. ms Yoon didn't explained her topic well

    Mr Kiwas
    has a slight introduction about the topic. the movie maker was entertaining and can lift the interest of the students in learning the lesson. the web page was also made with creativity and knowledge overall the topic was delivered well.

    Ms Bao-ilan
    has made the projects simple and complete she also explain the topic

    Ms Posido
    is having a difficulty in explaining her topic, she cant explain every content of her webpage, the sound was distracting that would prevent the students from listening the voice was also light that is difficult to hear during her discussion

    Ms Bulandres
    the audio that was used in her movie maker was distracting and not appropriate in here topic. but the content of the movie maker can motivate the students to learn taekwondo. the web page was nice

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  28. For kiwas, its good and interesting that's all. Your amazing.....no more to say hehe

    For Bao-ilan, your project are good you need to improve some features in your webpage like links that you created.
    For Jeramie, it was nice presentation but you need to improve more....
    For Kimberly, your project is interesting especially the movie maker.

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  29. Yoon Eunjin
    The motivation is lots of picture but really good to motivate the students,but she should explain also properly because maybe the kids will ask her if what is the important in the story.In the whole presentation

    Kiwas, Marcial
    The webpage is about music it contains different information that could be the student interest arouse in the the whole class.
    The prezi is really unique way and very presentable to the class.
    The motivation is really connected to the prezi that could be possible to the students really interest to do the lesson and do the activity us well. He is really
    more on advertising in the movie maker and system is just perfect for my needs.

    Bao-ilan
    There is problem in prezi presentation but she should complete information about the topic.Present in more improved way :)

    Posedio, Jeramie
    For the website is very nice but improve your prezi, yand the wedpage i didn`t understand ^-^

    Bulandres,Kimberly
    The motivation is really interesting the background sound of the moviemaker is really good and it also good to use new song to that make the students participate. All the presentation is really interesting because Olympic games is the best way to show talents.


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  30. yoon: the movie was not motivating though it has many pictures.
    the prezi, was informative because of its contains regarding her topic, but she did not present the 5 thinking skills that could be developed in the students . the webpage is good but it is not that informative.

    kiwas: webpage is very unique it contains different information that is very informative to the visitors of page.
    the prezi contains different animations that could capture the interest of the learners. the movie was interesting.

    bao-ilan: the prezi is informative no movie maker, and webpage.
    posedio: the movie maker is motivating, the prezi is informative and also the webpage.

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  31. http://youtu.be/GBpGBKJizIo movie maker

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  32. Ms. Castillo's presentation is good, however, she could've managed her time well. In her movie maker, some pictures are not clear and the texts cover the view. It is better if the text are put in the bottom part.

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  33. Ms. Amy Cabfeo's movie maker is informative. Her technique is very good because instead of putting the text along with the pictures, she separated it, that is why the text can be read clearly. However, it could've been better if the text animation is not that moving.

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  34. Ms. Laarni Toress' movie maker is creatively done. It is good that she cited her sources.
    The prezi presentation is well organized. The font style is good, however, it could've been better if the style is more readable.
    Her webpage design is cute but the title is cut. But as a whole, she did a very good webpage.

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  35. Mr. Jaime Agpalo's movie maker is excellent. The music is jiving with the topic. However, some pictures are covered with the texts. It could've been better if there are less words and the pictures would supplement the other information needed.
    His prezi presentation is good but the lesser words, the better.
    The webpage font is not readable. But the topic is interesting.

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  36. Cabfeo
    moviemaker:
    The texts animations are not good. And It was not able to aroused my attention because in that movie you are now discussing what the story all about because ):
    Prezi and webpage:
    Are not working.

    Miss Torres
    Movie maker:
    You must used better music background. Nonetheless, I did understand at the end because at first I can't relate to it.
    Prezi:
    It must be better if you lessen the words because there are instances that students or audiences will get lazy to read a very wordy texts. :)
    Webpage:
    It must be better if you used larger font of text to benefits others also. In all, it is good.

    Agpalo
    Movie maker:
    It was good. :)
    Prezi:
    It must be better if you place pictures to motivate more the students because as we all know we are visual learners.
    Webpage:
    It must be better if you have used larger font. It was good because there are pictures so that the viewers will not be having headaches on those words.. :)

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  37. Mariel castilio.
    Her movie maker and prezi is all about the elements of fiction. The prezi was clear and neat. In the movie-maker, some of the pictures are not much clear but I can still see it.
    Cabfeo
    Her report was about certain Japanese Story.
    Torres
    She introduced the musics in different ages, I was impressed on her webpage for having a tutorial session for beginners.
    Agpalo
    Movie-maker was impressive, the prezi was made in the purpose of practical use.
    Web-page is clearly organized simple but contains much of informations

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  38. Castillo: The moviemaker was creative but some text are covering the pictures. The Prezi was informative but the 5 thinking skills was not discussed thoroughly. The webpage was okay!
    Cabfeo: Some words are shaking. :) Improve your animations as well as your english pronunciation.
    Agpalo: The moviemaker was motivating. Highlight the important concepts or make it in bullet form. The webpage is creative.
    Escucharo: Job well done! but next time, make your background music related to the topic and make the pictures clearer. Practice speaking english for improving your grammar :) The webpage was creative and a lot of informations to ba gathered.

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  39. Miss Escucharo

    movie maker:
    The background music doesn't suit the pictures. And some pictures are viewed twice.
    Prezi:
    The prezi is informative. It has pictures that strengthen more the appeal of your discussion. :)
    Webpage:
    Has animations, Love it! But you must put some more important information. :)

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  40. Castillo: Movie-Some pictures are not clear.Too wordy. Prezi-Some words overlapped the layout.Webpage-It was not published.

    Cabfeo: Movie-Too wordy.The animation is destracting and too fast.Good intro :). Prezi-?Not presented.Webpage-?

    Torres: Movie-interesting,less words,clear pictures.Prezi-very informative.Webpage-The title was not seen very well.Good webpage.

    Agpalo: Movie-The pictures were covered by words.Too wordy. The same pictures.Prezi-No bullets.More pictures sir :)Webpage-Veri nformative and interesting. The pictures are clear.Only 2 hot potatoes.

    Escucharo: Movie- Wrong use of "a" it should be "an" before the word instrument.Some pictures are not clear and it was repeated.Prezi-Some pictures were covered by words. Wrong spelling of "Solibao". Webpage- No hot potatoes.It lack some information.



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  41. Ms. Marlene Escucharo's movie maker concept is interesting in the sense of idea organization. Some pictures are not clear.
    Her prezi presentation's color combination is good. However, the font color doesn't jive in.
    Her webpage is very interesting.

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  42. Castillo

    Movie Maker:
    Her movie maker text is not appropriate to the background design.
    Prezi:
    Her Prezi has no videos or I think its not working and lack of information. There is no activities to be done in Prezi or examples but only the instructions of the activity are presented.

    Webpage:
    The link in her webpage is not working.

    Cabfeo:
    Movie Maker:
    Some of her texts is not readable because her because of her animation style of the text.
    Prezi and Webpage not presented so she only explained it.

    Torres:

    Movie Maker
    Her movie maker; pictures image and sound is clear. However, between the texts and pictures image, the idea is not little organized well.

    Prezi:
    The Prezi, her topic has rich of information presented but the text is not much readable because of the text style. Her movie maker is well-done, very creative and was really organized well.
    Webpage: It is clear and complete.

    Agpalo:

    Movie Maker
    His movie maker is clear but the pictures is like almost the same.
    Prezi:
    His Prezi is informative.
    Webpage:
    His webpage is much creative and its interesting to learn.

    Escucharo:
    Movie Maker
    Some of her movie maker pictures are repeated but it is informative that shown the different people and places who uses the membrano phone; used widely.
    Prezi:
    The font color of the text were different which is distracting to the audience; there is no color sign for category, terms, and the information.
    Webpage: It is clear and is interesting site.


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  43. Escucharo
    Some of the pictures in movie-maker are not much clear.
    In prezi, she used black color of background so the letters are more being emphasized.

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  44. For Castillo, your movie, prezi and website are good but try to improve them in the future. Nice start. Just make sure your students will understand and can follow you when you will present.

    For Cabfeo, simple movie but remember that you need to arouse the interest of your students. I did not saw the challenging statement. Try to be creative. The choice of music is very important. Prezi, we need tangibility. hehe. Be wise next time.

    For Torres, the movie is good. It can arouse the interest of a student who loves classical but what if the student does not want classical music? That is a challenge. That should be seen in the movie. Prezi was well presented but try to reduce the words. Remember that when you teach, you are just given 45 mins to explain. Website is good but the color is pink which will not attract a male to explore the website. Overall, I appreciate your work. ^_^

    For Agpalo, the sound is awakening which is really good. It will arouse the interests of your students who love dance but what if they aren't? Can you motivate them still? Try to check also the coherence of your challenging words. (pero maganda ung video ah?pero pwede pang mapaganda un..hehe) Prezi, it is surprising that you have placed the steps of dance which is good. Website is also good but too many tabs because you have a very broad topic. Kahit sand painting lang ang topic sana pwede na. Hehe.

    For Escucharo, nice movie but I could not find the challenging statement. huhu. Prezi is good because you have a good combination of colors. You need to reduce the words because we only have limited time in discussion. Website, good looking but you have a very broad topic which is discouraged for beginners. Team Sports as topic will suffice the viewers.

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  45. Castillo:
    moviemaker:
    Pictures are not clear.Very simple music.
    prezi:
    nice background.it would be better if the links you placed will go to the page where you want it to go.very wordy.
    webpage:it was not published its very hard to visualize how is it arrange or we are not sure if links he have there is working especially the hot potatoes though she can improve her presentation

    Torres:
    Movie maker: its is good but very wordy the music is related to what should be discussed
    Prezi:it has good flow of the lesson she can improve her presentation
    Webpage: very nice its good

    escucharo:
    movie maker:
    some pictures were not clear. the pictures were repeated. I wasn't motivated at all.
    prezi:
    has a very smooth flow of the topic it is well however there are some fonts which can not readable.spelling over all it is an informational topic and presentation and it is very nice
    references were present.
    webpage: very nice it is suitable for athletes very nice effects

    Cabfeo:
    movie maker-
    very wordy. very interesting topic. I did not hear the music the animation of the text is distracting. it is an interesting story however just improve the presentation itself.
    prezi- it was not presented
    webpage-it was not presented

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  46. In this day..ms.mariel delivered her projects..its good and nice,for her prezi its nice because she included video relating to her lesson.

    Mrs.Torres,movie maker is good and catchy that really arouse the students.Regarding the prezi and her webpages good also and well done.

    Mr.Agpallo presented his movie maker but some pictures are covered.good prezi and webpages.

    Mrs.Marlene..good movie maker,give at least text to the beginning to arouse the students..Grammar for the prezi and webpages.

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  47. Castillo:
    Movie maker is not clear picture and
    Prezi very creative, very good colorful and wordy
    Webpage is okay but not published.

    Cabfeo:
    Movie the text are shaking, improve your animation and good motivation.
    Prezi is not presented wedpage

    Torres
    Movie very nice, interesting,clear pictures and good presentation.
    Prezi is nice good, interesting good job.
    Webpage interesting website and creative.

    Agpalo
    Movie maker motivating, not bullet form
    Prezi good presentation
    Webpage interesting website.
    Nice job

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  48. Miss Cafeo:
    movie maker: the topic is good but some of the text is moving.
    Prezi and webpage: was not able to show.

    Miss Torres:The movie maker is good and the pictures are clear.
    Prezi: Good topic.
    Webpage: Much better is you enlarge some of the text but over all well done.
    Mr. Agpalo
    Movie maker:The music is working and good but some of the text covered the pictures.
    Prezi:much better is you put some pictures or video and you was not able to put the reference.
    Webpage:Much better if you enlarge the text.
    Miss Marlene
    The movie maker is good but some of the pictures was repeated.
    Prezi and webpage: Pictures are clear and good.

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  49. Castillo:MOVIE: the audio that she used in the movie is not fit to her pictures.
    PREZI: the five thinking skills are not showcased.
    WEBPAGE: It was oky!

    CABFEO:MOVIE: the movie was not motivating because the audio was boring, and the texts has inappropriate animation.
    Prezi: nO PREZI.
    WEbPAGE: NO webpage

    TORRES: MOVIE: the movie was motivating, because it has a very impressive introduction, and the transitions are good, and the video suits her topic.
    PREZI: it was very informative.
    WEBPAGE: interesting and informative.

    AGPALO: MOVIE: His movie is motivating because his audio suits the interest of the students.
    Prezi: it's not readable. but then it's still informative. no sources.
    WEBPAGE: personal contribution is shown.

    ESCUCHARO: MOVIE: the audio is not fit to her topic.
    Prezi: Too wordy. Practice speaking in English
    Webpage: creative and informative.

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  51. Mariel Castillo
    --Your movie maker was good but then it could be better if you put your caption below the picture.Then for your prezi, it could be better also if you are able to elaborate more on the five thinking skills that are present in your prezi.

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  52. Marlene Escucharo
    --Your presentation is nice. It can really motivate your learners later on however, it could be great if you are able to organize your presentation.So far it was a good start..

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  53. Laarni Torres
    --Job well done,I Like how you organize your topic about western music..It is thoroughly prepared in a sense that it is presented in a systematic way.But for your prezi, it could be better if you separate the sub topic..All in all, you made a great impact on your project

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  54. Jaime Agpalo
    --Your presentation is very nice.I like the way you organize your movie maker, prezi and webpage.Your video clip is so catchy but then avoid putting captions to pictures that emphasizes your topic.For your prezi,just acknowledge the source..All in all your presentation is great.

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  55. Mr. Leemar Simon's presentation is smooth sailing... his prezi is well organized except for some technical errors like the font size ans font color...his webpage's concept is also unique..

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  56. MARCH 4 PRESENTATION

    Marty:
    The movie maker of Marty is really interesting and real, most especially it it inspiring for the students. Also it is authentic based on his experiences with regards to his topic ab out Boxing.
    Webpage:
    Specific and informative information about Boxing.
    Prezi: Add more information in the History of Boxing and give more details of information about your topic, Boxing.

    Yu:

    Movie Maker:
    His movie maker is well-organized well;has variety of sound on his sound with the pictures shown. Not emphasized well the relation of the Video clip to the lesson.
    Prezi:
    Rich of information about the topic and it is creative well. There is the error in the activity about the instructions wherein identify each highlighted words in the sentence activity.
    Webpage:
    Great work, it is really creative and has much of information. It has complete links. It is interesting because it has fun activity using the Hot Potatoes Software

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  57. Kathleen Grace

    Movie Maker:
    I could not see the interesting in the Pictures.

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  58. I really thankful to you for this great read!! You did a very great job, keep it up.animated intro maker

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